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Old 06-21-2006, 10:02 PM   #55
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Quote:
Originally Posted by jbsnadb
Another (n) missing its (l) and a missing word:

[348-14488] called strike three!
Fullerton (batter) just watched it go by...(n) Weier rung him up a
[314-8834} heater knee high...

Obvoiusly, the (n) should be an (nl) and the line should read...

"Weier (pitcher) rung him up with a...
Already caught the (nl) problem, and I used "on" instead of "with." Plus, the right verb here is "rang," nut "rung." (Fixed a number of these verb errors in other places as well.)
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