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reds1,
It is hard to improve on perfection... your United Leagues of Braeland is excellent in all respects... IMHO one of the all-time best Dynasties on this Forum.
This is not a criticism, just a personal opinion and observation. I really enjoy your excerpts from the fictional book that covers the history of Braeland. You really are a fine writer and great with dialogue. This element lifts you a little above the other great dynasties that I have enjoyed over the years. The Babe Ruth stories really got to me... the royal commission, the history timeline and the coverage of the royal family and civil war... I like the way you set the stage for World War II, too.
It is my suggestion to have the excerpts a little more frequently if your time permits. I know you can't do everything you want on a dynasty as it can consume your life totally if you try... instead of being a "labor of love", it can become tiring burden, if you don't watch it.
Keep up the great work... your content, graphics and presentation is flawless as it is... almost beyond perfection.
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