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[26-209] The rumor has been out there for a while now and today it was made official. The Carolina Hurricanes have sent 22-year-old Left Wing A.J. Jenks, the 2013 NHL Entry Draft round 4 (Carolina) pick to the Winnipeg Jets for 24-year-old Center Bryan Little.
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I don't know about you guys, but the wording seems a bit off to me. I feel that something like "The Carolina Hurricanes have sent [player] and [pick owner]'s [round number] pick in the [year] NHL Entry Draft to the Winnipeg Jets for [player]" flows a bit better and sounds a bit more like what a real press release would sound like.